Thursday, 31 March 2016

ROOM 4 WRITING




The model we wrote as a class


Recently our class has been making some poetry about a book called Jumanji that our class has been reading for the past 2 weeks. I would  like to share some finished poetry with you.



I felt the ground shake like an earthquake
I saw the bright lights turn green
I heard a horrible SCREECH as I pushed the brake
I saw big fat rhinos charging past me 
I saw the dry dust blow past me
I saw a group of gigantic elephants taking big steps as they waved       their big trunks at me.

By: Shanaria Pillay

I heard the screech of the brake as the dust over looked the car. 
I felt the ground wobble like and earthquake
I heard the deafening sound of drums but it was the rhinos
I felt dizzy and wearing as i rushed out
I saw the light change grass green
I wondered what that tape did to me.


By: Leah Wood


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